This is a Kindle unlimited series, and as much as I liked it I don’t think I would be willing to put that much time into the plot. I felt that this should have been a one book deal.
The characters were very hot and cold the whole time and when it was hot it was hot. Female MC an be strong at times, but makes stupid decisions that sabotage her relationship with male mc. Book 1 ends in the middle of one of these poor decisions.
Make MC needs to decide what he wants. Is he hot or is he cold? Right now he has major mood swings that just leave the reader feeling like he’s a mess.
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